Last week I posted my poem Haiku Achoo, noting that it was surely a title that had been used before. Indeed, a quick search of the web revealed at least one other example, courtesy of poetry.com. For the sake of comparison and what have you, I'm sharing it with you this week:
Achoo! A-achoo!
Sneezing, I write my Haiku
And wipe my red nose.
So, dear reader, whose is better -- Mr Staton's, or mine? As with all good writers, I appreciate your honest feedback.
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